http://www.neopets.com/~Please_Critique I know it's a little long but I want opinions on it now before I revise it and continue with the story. Please post a link here, I don't do poetry but I'll give a good critique on prose if you give me one. Please, nothing off site, or posted directly on the board. If you only post one line of critique I will do the same. And yes, I know, the first sentence is jacked up.
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http://www.neopets.com/~Please_Critique I know it's a little long but I want opinions on it now before I revise it and continue with the story. Please post a link here, I don't do poetry but I'll give a good critique on prose if you give me one. Please, nothing off site, or posted directly on the board. If you only post one line of critique I will do the same. And yes, I know, the first sentence is jacked up.
