While your intent is clear, I am inclined to quibble. I would substitute wasps with bees, and rusty barbwire with the bottle. At the very least, the glass could be molten.
You know, of course, that these thoughts harm us, not them. It is significantly healthier to wish they acquire compassion and empathy, and recompense their actions. Oh, and left out something about genitals, humiliation, and something stinky with acid. Like Joan River’s vagina.

Joan Rivers CC Roast – Gilbert Gottfried (6:19) start at 1:50
www.youtube.com/watch?v=UrYBUGiVeV0