That’s a good start but it’s only a start. He doesn’t look damp enough, or diseased enough, or scabby enough, or cold enough, or dirty enough. He’s eating stuff that is far too good for the likes of him and he has far too many teeth to do it with. I want to see evidence of starvation, beatings and contagion. What’s missing is copious amounts of faecal matter and spit.
That’s a good start but it’s only a start. He doesn’t look damp enough, or diseased enough, or scabby enough, or cold enough, or dirty enough. He’s eating stuff that is far too good for the likes of him and he has far too many teeth to do it with. I want to see evidence of starvation, beatings and contagion. What’s missing is copious amounts of faecal matter and spit.